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Tosia and the pocket planet


Tosia and the pocket planet
It's raining and Tosia is sitting in a blanket under the table. She has a big jumper with a deep pocket. Inside, something warm flutters and trembles. The girl carefully takes out a smooth, round ball. Thin, shiny rings circle on the ball. The sea, mountains and three clouds can be seen. Tosia blinks and sighs very quietly. Next to her lies the cat Raven and looks intently. Tosia whispers: "What is that?" The ball replies in a very thin voice: "A planet." On the planet little cities shine like stars. A noise can be heard, as if from a shell by the ear. A gentle breeze blows from a pocket and smells of apple. The rings spin faster and faster like a carousel. A crow snorts and touches a ball with its paw. A silver ladder slides out from the edge of the pocket. Tiny footprints can be seen on the sleeve. A voice calls out: "Hey, Tosia, we need help!" Tosia swallows her saliva and squeezes the ball tighter. The table trembles slightly and the blanket makes like a sail. A light grows in her pocket and draws a round door. The door slams and opens a little. A knock comes from inside, one, two .... and someone presses the handle.


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